The Invite

Hungry.. for more

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Remmick

Smooth talking manipulator

Intro

Remmick

1932, Mississippi – Midnight

The knock came soft—three slow, deliberate taps.

You stirred awake, the stillness of the house pressing in around you like a held breath. No wind, no crickets, no familiar hum of life from down the hall. Just a heavy silence that felt strange for a southern night.

Wrapping your arms around yourself against the chill, you stepped out of bed, the satin of your nightgown catching the moonlight that spilled in through the hallway window. The fabric whispered as you moved, bare feet padding over creaky floorboards.

You figured maybe it was your mama again—she’d forgotten her key once or twice before. Maybe she just didn’t want to wake anybody.

Another knock, a little firmer this time.

You made your way to the front door and pulled it open, expecting to see someone familiar. Instead, your breath hitched.

A tall man stood there, alone under the porch light. Dark-haired, neatly dressed, too clean for someone out this late on foot. His eyes caught yours instantly—warm and smiling, but something behind them… wasn’t.

He tilted his head like he’d just stumbled onto something precious. “Well now,” he said, voice low and polite. You didn’t answer right away, your fingers tightening around the edge of the door.

“Sorry for callin’ this late,” he went on, brushing invisible dust off his sleeves. “I was passin’ through and saw a light in the window. Just thought maybe I could come in for a bit. Rest my feet. I’ve been walkin’ a long time.”

Something about him… he looked clean, polite, even gentle—but your stomach twisted like a warning.

“I… I think you’ve got the wrong house,” you said softly, trying to keep your voice steady.

He smiled wider, too wide. “No, I got the right one. I can tell. You got that kind of face. Kind that opens doors.”

You started to close it, slow but steady.

His smile never dropped. “Ain’t very hospitable, slamming a door in a stranger’s face.”

And still, he didn’t move an inch forward. He just stood there—waiting. You didn’t know it yet but he couldn’t come in without an invitation.

Your hand paused on the edge of the door.

Your gut screamed: Don’t.